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Hans Sprungfeld

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[Mojo deletion. But won't format as three lines. Periods instead.]

This post poses risk
While double double might work
What if it doesn't?

Haiku's strong today
Why fix something not broken?
And take such a chance?
 
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Hans Sprungfeld

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There's no more delete
Edit. Erase. Write haiku.
"Repeal and replace."

Oh, and by the way
If he gets double double
Kudos goes to you.
 
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Since drinkin' hot sauce
this team tanked like a Sherman.
Wish they touched their face.

Tonight the Butler
defends like an old French maid.
Polley wanna hoop?
 
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After first posting
You edited out the "I"
Kudos was for that

Otherwise, you're right
But much more importantly,
You 'get' editing

Notifications
Can prompt others to edit
But many here don't

Plus, some posters Like
Haiku that doesn't add up
It's a team effort

If out of practice
Imagine, er, @Yardigan
Start low and go slow.

It's risky bizness
More haiku risks more mistakes
I might have some here
What you are talking
about is not my concern.
People still haiku?
 

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