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CL82

2023 NCAA Men’s Basketball National Champions
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Kudos for the change
Timely edits help mojo
Which helps the team win
It's not my Haiku
So it still may need to be
corrected, I guess.

First haiku: first line
Second haiku: 1 & 2
Practice makes perfect
I did get these though.
I can't believe I missed them.
I'm out of practice.

With longer haikus
there is a bigger chance for
goofs. Start small, I guess.
 

RichZ

Fort the ead!
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Some Husky must score
a whole lot of points tonight
Is it Whaley's turn?

I don't care who fills
The stat sheet with big numbers
but someone has to

Need a W
two Ls in a row is bad
But three would be worse
 

Hans Sprungfeld

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It's not my Haiku
So it still may need to be
corrected, I guess.
After first posting
You edited out the "I"
Kudos was for that

Otherwise, you're right
But much more importantly,
You 'get' editing

Notifications
Can prompt others to edit
But many here don't

Plus, some posters Like
Haiku that doesn't add up
It's a team effort

If out of practice
Imagine, er, @Yardigan
Start low and go slow.

It's risky bizness
More haiku risks more mistakes
I might have some here
 
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ClifSpliffy

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'tuesday. winter.' ummmmm,
screw Poe, think Al Bundy. whoomp!
go upside dey hedd.

party people, wave
hands in the air, and shake ur
dog derriers! whoomp!

whoomp, there it is. say
whoomp, there it is! once again,
say Whoomp! There it Is!

 

Hans Sprungfeld

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So line two now fixed
Mojo gods rightly called out
Lacking haiku skillz
Awesome follow-up
This is our teamwork as fans
We all play our part

Ambitious goal is
Flawless haiku by tipoff
As season goes forrh

Free throws & layups
Are player priorities
And healed injuries

Lots on coaches' plates:
Lineups, timeouts, adjusting
O & D in-game
 

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