Game Day Haiku

[CL82]

Kudos for the change
Timely edits help mojo
Which helps the team win

It's not my Haiku
So it still may need to be
corrected, I guess.

First haiku: first line
Second haiku: 1 & 2
Practice makes perfect

I did get these though.
I can't believe I missed them.
I'm out of practice.

With longer haikus
there is a bigger chance for
goofs. Start small, I guess.

 

[RichZ]

Some Husky must score
a whole lot of points tonight
Is it Whaley's turn?

I don't care who fills
The stat sheet with big numbers
but someone has to

Need a W
two Ls in a row is bad
But three would be worse

 

[Huskybass]

Martin leads the way
A Double U stops the slide
Chief will not be brief

 

[ZenConn]

Senior Leadership
Why depend on a freshman?
Lead the way seniors

Stop missing bunnies
Free throws need to get better
Dunk dat $h! t all day

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

It's not my Haiku
So it still may need to be
corrected, I guess.

After first posting
You edited out the "I"
Kudos was for that

Otherwise, you're right
But much more importantly,
You 'get' editing

Notifications
Can prompt others to edit
But many here don't

Plus, some posters Like
Haiku that doesn't add up
It's a team effort

If out of practice
Imagine, er, @Yardigan
Start low and go slow.

It's risky bizness
More haiku risks more mistakes
I might have some here

 

[Son of Robert]

Jeez fellas, I'm all
lost in the supermarket
can I get a break?

 

[ClifSpliffy]

'tuesday. winter.' ummmmm,
screw Poe, think Al Bundy. whoomp!
go upside dey hedd.

party people, wave
hands in the air, and shake ur
dog derriers! whoomp!

whoomp, there it is. say
whoomp, there it is! once again,
say Whoomp! There it Is!

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

Jeez fellas, I'm all
lost in the supermarket
can I get a break?

Can you still edit?
You deserve a break today
Clash or McDonald's?

 

[Son of Robert]

I came in today
just for the special offer
can't find my way out

Walking in circles
every aisle looks the same
I need an usher

 

[CL82]

Snow falls on the ground.
Haikus drop like the snowflakes.
It's good for mojo.

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

I came in here

Personality
Guaranteed only after
You make the edit

 

[Skiblets]

Can you still edit?
You deserve a break today
Clash or McDonald's?

A Clash shout out eh?
Hope Our long distance ballers
Make long distance hoops

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

A Clash shout out eh?
Hope Our long distance ballers will
Make long distance hoops

Thank @Son of Robert
For initial Clash ref'rence
And edit line two

 

[CL82]

The mojo is a
hard taskmaster, so is Hans.
That has to be good.

 

[mussels]

A Clash shout out eh?
Hope Our long distance ballers will
Make long distance hoops

Sometimes must lose hope
to improve Husky mojo
look at second line

 

[Skiblets]

A Clash shout out eh?
Hope Our long distance ballers
Make long distance hoops

So line two now fixed
Mojo gods rightly called out
Lacking haiku skillz

 

[8893]

Thank @Son of Robert
For initial Clash ref'rence
And edit line two

Nice job with Clampdown
Hope you didn't Train in Vain
Need Complete Control

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

So line two now fixed
Mojo gods rightly called out
Lacking haiku skillz

Awesome follow-up
This is our teamwork as fans
We all play our part

Ambitious goal is
Flawless haiku by tipoff
As season goes forrh

Free throws & layups
Are player priorities
And healed injuries

Lots on coaches' plates:
Lineups, timeouts, adjusting
O & D in-game

 

[Skiblets]

Nice job with Clampdown
Hope you didn't Train in Vain
Need Complete Control

I am a white man
Went to hammer smith palais
Whilst was in London

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

Nice job with Clampdown
Hope you didn't Train in Vain
Need Complete Control

Give [it] enough rope
And "...only band that matters"
Helps the mojo too

 

[Hey Adrien!]

Win 2 out of 3
and we should be in good shape,
but win this one first.

 

[Skiblets]

Give [it] enough rope
And "...only band that matters"
Helps the mojo too

Clash rock the casbah
Prefer the Mescaleros
Joe at his finest

 

[jayteeman]

A good dog gets it
A bad dog does not get it
You get it you win

 

[8893]

^
Limerick is not
It is a mojo killer
And Irish city

 

[Kolumbo]

^
^
If the yard concurs
I will delete my wry try
Mojo, we need now