St. John's Game Day Haiku

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Huskies and Red Storm
A chance for revenge tonight
The boys find a way

 

[Vancat]

Speedboat Karaban
Solo becomes a stop sign
Grizzly bear Tarris

 

[Husky Alien]

A storm is brewing
not red. Blue and white UConn
We better be loud

A storm is brewing:
UConn blue & white; NOT red
We better be loud

 

[karstenkibbe]

Red Storm fizzles out
Ball Alex Bray make it rain
Reed destroys Zuby

 

[Lafayette]

white out, white in yes!
punk style Pitino exposed
refs be fair please, ok?

 

[BlueandOG]

Please, enough nonsense!
We need a packed and loud house
to support our team.

On the court, play smart!
We have the better team and
a MUCH better coach.

 

[HuskiesFourLife]

Match their physicality
Make the 3 s that they cant
Take care of the ball
Crowd needs to be epic

 

[DW1361]

The Red Storm is here
UConn will stand up and shine
Stomp those pink puddles

 

[Waquoit]

The late Al Davis
Summed it up nicely when he
Said, “Just win, baby!”

 

[Son of Robert]

This game, BIG EAST FIRE!!!
one of the best games this year
take no prisoners

 

[TheShot1990]

Make them pay big time
For pressuring the inbounds
No mercy this time

 

[Doctor Hoop]

You want a 1 seed?
Step up, knock off the Johnnies
And you have that chance

 

[Doctor Hoop]

Match their physicality
Make the 3 s that they cant
Take care of the ball
Crowd needs to be epic

Funny, I thought that
This was the Haiku thread, but
Am I mistaken?

 

[JCSuperstar]

Smell the burning sage
Drink deep from the pee bottle
Basketball Gods smile

Grabs and holds uncalled
Hurley gets himself run out
It works and we win

 

[RedDog]

Time for the Red Storm
To heed Red’s second order.
Get busy diein’.

 

[Kolumbo]

We have big snow storms
UConn Huskies love the snow
I love to shovel

HCC will rock
Huskies raining threes by dawgs
shots heard round the block

 

[BigErnMcCracken]

There's a haiku we need in here for mojo and I'm not seeing it.

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

A storm is brewing
Not red, blue and white UConn
We better be loud

Haiku counts right,
but confuses cuz looks like
Oxford comma fail

It's the opposite
But is hard to see that way
Clarity rewrite...

A storm is brewing:
UConn blue & white; NOT red
We better be loud

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

white out, white in yes!
punk style Pitino exposed
refs be fair please, ok?

Line 3 is too long
You could remove the word "please"
Or shorten to "K?"

Match their physicality
Make the 3 s that they cant
Take care of the ball
Crowd needs to be epic

Post handle count fail?
Four lines: seven six five six
Four versus for? Fore!

There's a haiku we need in here for mojo and I'm not seeing it.

Called to contribute,
and this is what you offer?
Play here to your strengths

From Cardozo, "The
timorous should stay at home."
Haiku or silence.

Emulate a man
whose cheering earns an escort
Out from MSG

 

[Dove]

Nova win still fresh.
Huskies accelerating!
Tonight's win be fresh.

 

[Son of Robert]

There's a haiku we need in here for mojo and I'm not seeing it.

You the man Big Ern
scratch out a few words for this
you know you want to

 

[Umami Zen]

Big onions don't lie
Huskies crush Storm-Whatta high!
Think Rick gonna cry.

 

[BigErnMcCracken]

A downvote is close enough. I feel better about tonight.

 

[OkaForPrez]

An old school showdown.
Huskies come out guns blazing.
Red dead redemption.

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

A downvote is close enough. I feel better about tonight.

It's not about you
It's setting an example
by small disciplines

You don't have to play
It's better to stay away
Than upset the Tao

One game at a time
We know Hurley's sequential
goals for team success

 

[mussels]

There's a haiku we need in here for mojo and I'm not seeing it.

There’s a haiku we
need in here for mojo and
I’m not seeing it

But of course you did
an interesting take for sure
on anti haiku

 

[Husky Alien]

Haiku counts right, but confuses for looking like
Oxford comma fail

It's the opposite
But is hard to see that way
Clarity rewrite...

A storm is brewing:
UConn blue & white; NOT red
We better be loud

Yours is not haiku
Form. I slightly fixed it now
Without total change

Maybe now no doubt
or confusion. This should work
Thanks as always Hans

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

A downvote is close

enough. Now, I feel better

about tonight's game.

Now I understand
But this post wasn't haiku
So I corrected

There's a haiku we

need in here for mojo and

I'm not seeing it.

Ah, now I get it
But lines were still slightly off
So I corrected

 

[jayteeman]

Reds out of order
Pitino out of order
Dogs decide justice

 

[Ewekon]

Lou's ugly sweaters
Can't cover St. John's weakness
Dogs clean up Red Stain

Red storm? That's for sure
Huskies smell blood in the wind
UConn whites out storm