First Game Haiku

[DALTX]

First game of season
I need to fiddle with apps
A Roku Haiku

 

[Husky Alien]

Wow, I still can't count
OK: 7-7-6
Counting is a bitch

I'm not seeing it
I'm not saying that you're wrong
Just not seeing it

Can you point it out?
So I can say, "I get it."
That'd be helpful

so your second line
I am only counting six right?
that is highlighted

 

[BlueMAB]

so your second line
I am only counting six right?
that is highlighted

No, it is "okay"
then seven, seven, and six
math is not that hard

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

so your second line
I am only counting six right?
that is highlighted

I'm counting seven
OK, sev-en sev-en, six
2. Plus 4. Plus 1.

As to your haiku
Line 2: Change "I am" to "I'm"
Or, get rid of "right"

Or maybe I'm wrong
Counting IS crazy-making
Plus, a new season!

 

[Husky Alien]

No, it is "okay"
then seven, seven, and six
math is not that hard

Ah now I see says
me you are good Hans okay
went over my head

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

No, it is "okay"
then seven, seven, and six
math is not that hard

Ah now I see says
me you are good Hans okay
went over my head

Haiku's a team sport
And we are Boneyard teammates
Season has started

 

[Husky Alien]

felt good to watch UConn
basketball tonight and crowd
we are young and tough

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

felt good to watch UConn
basketball tonight and crowd
we are young and tough

That pesky first line
You could drop out the first word
But it did feel good

 

[Husky Alien]

That pesky first line
You could drop out the first word
But it did feel good

damn I can't watch
game and type haiku in mind
thanks for the right way

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

damn I can't watch
game and type haiku in mind
thanks for the right way

After that first line,
And, really, the second too
I do believe you

 

[Ewekon]

Got satisfaction
No sympathy for devils
Huskies howlin' wolves

 

[Chosen]

Its gameday at uconn
Adrillene is flowing
Cant wait for offense and defense
To shine

Let's go uconn
Comes from the stands
Home and away

Let's go uconn
Bring home a W

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

Its gameday at uconn
Adrillene is flowing
Cant wait for offense and defense
To shine

Let's go uconn
Comes from the stands
Home and away

Let's go uconn
Bring home a W

Adrillene's sobbing:
"That wasn't haiku, and it's
not even game day!"

Haiku is rule-bound
First line is 5 syllables
Then 7, then 5

Anything other
than 5, then 7, then 5?
Keep it to yourself

As to, "It's gameday"
That was yesterday, Chosen
Maybe sleep it off?

 

[Chosen]

My friend online told me about the structure of a haiku and so here is my huskies haiku

I am a huge fan
Obsessed fan I know I am
It is all I know

If you want to become great
See you on the Wall at home
And on a banner

One play at a time
Score on that play and focus
Stop the opponent

Let's go get a win
It will be very special
In my heart and soul

 

[August_West]

Just shut up, @Dove
I said Shut the hell up @Dove
wash your satin pants