Depaul haiku

[8893]

I failed my last line.
My apologies for this.
“I care not FOR Paul.”

That is why we have
The edit function, i.e.,
To fix our mistakes

 

[bendm]

ranked for the first time,
in a long 51 months,
dont lose the next game.

 

[UCLJ0211]

No Bouk, no problem
Too much depth and tough defense
Leads to a vic’try 😉

 

[mussels]

Huskies on the road
windy tonight in Chi town
dogs win in blow out

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

Deep dish still no good
Even in Windy City
Huskies, apizza rule

I see what you did
Line three is designed to fool
Deep dish pizza fans

“Of the Paul” they claim.
Who is this Paul anyway?
I care not about this Paul

So many Likes from you
But please change line 3: needs 5
And thanks in advance

Your re-write is fine
But Edit the first one for
Maximum mojo

ranked for the first time,
in 4 years and 3 months,
dont lose the next game.

Edit line 2 please
Extra syllable helps team
One game at a time

I tutor 'til 6,
The home to myself 'til 8:
Sounds perfect to me.

Your count is correct
Can you Edit "The" to "Then"
At start of line 2?

Or did you mean "The"?
It could actually work
In which case it's fine

6pm game time
My hands will be freshly cleaned
I won't touch my face

More, better haiku
Team is coming together:
Coaches, players, fans

 

[DALTX]

Five PM out West
Impressive early challenge
Trust UConn makes plays

 

[Ewekon]

DePaul still losing
Always root for Dave Leito
But just not tonight.

 

[Doctor Hoop]

Avoid a misstep
3rd game on the road is tough
Al Davis: Just win

 

[Kolumbo]

There once was a championship team
Which rose to the top just like cream
But after a spell
In a conference from hell
The team is again gaining steam

 

[JakeTheDog]

I would trust Polley
To shoot peas into a straw
Dudes been like Rashad

 

[jayteeman]

Here we go agwin
DahBears, DahBulls and DahPaul
Dahnother big grin

 

[TerryBoyz]

Sweep the blue demons?
But I like coach Leitao!
Life in the Big East

 

[Hey Adrien!]

RJ Cole's tattoo
distracts me more than others:
I'm a Rangers fan.