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ranked for the first time,
in a long 51 months,
dont lose the next game.
 
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Deep dish still no good
Even in Windy City
Huskies, apizza rule
I see what you did
Line three is designed to fool
Deep dish pizza fans

So many Likes from you
But please change line 3: needs 5
And thanks in advance

Your re-write is fine
But Edit the first one for
Maximum mojo

ranked for the first time,
in 4 years and 3 months,
dont lose the next game.
Edit line 2 please
Extra syllable helps team
One game at a time
I tutor 'til 6,
The home to myself 'til 8:
Sounds perfect to me.
Your count is correct
Can you Edit "The" to "Then"
At start of line 2?

Or did you mean "The"?
It could actually work
In which case it's fine

6pm game time
My hands will be freshly cleaned
I won't touch my face

More, better haiku
Team is coming together:
Coaches, players, fans
 
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There once was a championship team
Which rose to the top just like cream
But after a spell
In a conference from hell
The team is again gaining steam :cool:
 

JakeTheDog

Makin’ bacon pancakes
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I would trust Polley
To shoot peas into a straw
Dudes been like Rashad
 

TerryBoyz

Get four fruits!
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Sweep the blue demons?
But I like coach Leitao!
Life in the Big East
 

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