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Message: [QUOTE="Hans Sprungfeld, post: 4129621, member: 181"] Those 'judgment call' words Can really be vexatious Hour, fire, violent, more To some, it could be "Ow-er," "fi-er," "vi-o-lent" No easy answers I avoid their use, hyphenate, apostrophize Haiku is stressful Constant vigilance is the price of freedom, and still there are 'issues' Faster-playing teams Often have more turnovers How to find balance? Let's count, check, and care Band together as a team And show compassion In classic haiku Tranquil images abound Here, not so easy It is December We're on a season-long arc Tonight's a big test With each haiku post I fear that I've made mistakes We need each other We all play our part The coaches, players, and fans Building t'ward greatness Let's pull together And win our first true road game Go UConn Huskies! My final 'review'? 3 (since-corrected) errors And I changed to "t'ward" And still I wonder Have I missed any, or some? Help me out if so [/QUOTE]