Hans Sprungfeld Joined Aug 26, 2011 Messages 13,754 Reaction Score 34,975 Nov 30, 2024 #26 mussels said: Haiku stronger now we struggled some before this with practice mojo rises Expand ... Still time to make true That two too-long final line Should be only 5
mussels said: Haiku stronger now we struggled some before this with practice mojo rises Expand ... Still time to make true That two too-long final line Should be only 5
M mussels Joined Dec 11, 2014 Messages 1,651 Reaction Score 9,959 Nov 30, 2024 #27 Guess I still struggle premature declaration of improved haiku
Hans Sprungfeld Joined Aug 26, 2011 Messages 13,754 Reaction Score 34,975 Nov 30, 2024 #28 mussels said: Guess I still struggle premature declaration of improved haiku Expand ... Editing-window success always gets a LOVE This ices the cake
mussels said: Guess I still struggle premature declaration of improved haiku Expand ... Editing-window success always gets a LOVE This ices the cake
