Poetic licenseFif-ty one's too short
Take an alternate route that's
Fif-ty sev-en miles
Still time to rewrite
A five-seven-five haiku
Or a brand new one
"Blue Demon Degen" ?
Is that what you intended?
Line two puzzles me
Counting syllables
Is voluntary service
Like starting the thread
Kudos to Storrs Roars
Inish-a-tive is teamwork
We all pull the sled
Hey, give it a try
Start the thread, count syllables,
Teamwork is dreamwork
And one final thing:
Larry Ketvirtis isn't
Walking through that door
Field of 68?
Blue Demon Degenerate?
Both are distractions
As to the haikus
Quality not quantity
Is what matters most
Patience grasshopper
I don't count that time unit
The same as you do
First stroll neighborhood
With favorite two-year old
Haiku comes after
Sounds like Jen-ret which is short
For degenerate