OT-Wrote my first sports article

[Drew]

Hello to all. I was recently asked to contribute to one of my friends sports sites regarding the NBA offseason and I chose to wrote about my beloved hometown Charlotte Hornets. The link is below and any feedback that anyone has would be greatly appreciated, positive or negative. Just something I'm doing for fun but I really enjoyed doing it, hopefully it doesn't make your eyes bleed!

http://www.seasonsover.com/nba/the-path-to-prosperity-the-timely-death-of-the-bobcats