New Hampshire Haiku Thread

[CL82]

Does anybody
actually check to see if
syllables add up?

You are pretty close.
Too many syllables in
your line number two.

 

[Dove]

Those White Mountain Boys
Send them back to their Notches
Tails between crotches

 

[8893]

Victory margin
Makes Mt. Washington look like
Horsebarn Hill instead

 

[Tk79]

The new guys can play
Shonn, Sterling, and Jalen too
No doubts anymore

The returning core
Amida, Daniel, Rodney
Are all great talents

The bench depth is strong
Kentan, Phil, Omar, Sam, Steve
They can hold their own

Kevin is a stud
Coach, mentor, motivator
He has ten toes in

Chemistry is key
For team to reach potential
All looks good so far

Tonight we learn more
About what needs improving
To get to Houston

I cannot contain
My excitement for this team
Season will be fun

 

[Durks07]

You are pretty close.
Edit your post to exchange
third and second lines.

your helpfulness
is kind but too late
i can not edit

 

[CL82]

your helpfulness
is kind but too late
i can not edit

Haikus are not hard:
First line 5, second 7
Third line 5, you fools.

Count the syllables
You must have five-seven-five.
Mojo demands it.

 

[CAHUSKY]

In meetings tonight
Have to watch on DVR
DONT text me the score.

DHam has sweet hair
Steve Enochs is awesome too
Charlie V?............no pubes

 

[DALTX]

The team from Durham
Yet another UNH
Will go home "Concord"