Game Day Haiku

[8893]

A day with a game
Is better than one without
Winning, better still

 

[Kolumbo]

A Dog-Eat-Dog World
Working versus non-sporting
Huskies win the fight

 

[HuskyHawk]

Relentless we strive
Man and ball to the basket
The bunnies will fall

 

[Doginaus]

Home game for Huskies,
Butler Bulldogs come to town,
and leave with a loss.

The Butler did it,
No, not this time Bulldog fans,
Uconn for the win.

Hey LaVall Jordan!
You got your hands full tonite,
lose to Dan Hurley!

 

[Chosen]

Wow those are good haiku. This brought me back to my creative writing class I took in high school. Anyway good haiku all.

 

[Vancat]

Excitement lagging
I'm sorry but we need Bouk
Can't get pumped these days

 

[Ewekon]

Bulldogs are ugly
Husky dogs are alluring
Beauty beats the beast

 

[8893]

Excitement lagging
I'm sorry but we need Bouk
Can't get pumped these days

Hey, Eeyore, chin up
We are still favored to win
And that we shall do

 

[mussels]

Cats and dogs in stands
will startle Bulldogs in their
first game at Gampel

 

[Doctor Hoop]

Two losses gone by
And it's time to start winning
Today is the day

 

[Son of Robert]

Winter color grey
January is quiet
til it's eight thirty

Find me the remote
going to watch some tv
winning would be nice

 

[QDOG5]

Shooting percentage
At the hoop not very good
Fix it beat Butler

Yarders synchronize
Spelling UCONN not that hard
Work together team

 

[mussels]

Winter color grey
January is quiet
til it's eight thirty

Find me the remote
going to watch me some tv
winning would be nice

Grey morning indeed
when haiku master makes goof
need to lose the "me"

 

[Skiblets]

Butler falls in Storrs
Gampel better than Hinkel
This is not Hoosiers

 

[CL82]

Lost twice in a row
So now I post in Haiku,
At least for this thread.

We're better with Bouk
But are we still good enough?
I think that we are.

Tough defense will help
But the ball must find basket
more consistently.

Who will score for us?
Sanogo will help for sure.
Will Martin wake up?

Cole or Gaffney must
find a way to run the team
and make open shots.

Danny Hurley please
avoid stupid technicals
cannot afford it.

U C O N N!
Go Connecticut Huskies
UConn, go, fight win.

 

[wheelerdog]

Time to buckle up
Fifteen days since victory
the losing ends now

 

[CL82]

Grey morning indeed
when haiku master makes goof
need to lose the "me"

It looks good to me.
Meets 5-7-5 format.
What am I missing?

 

[Kolumbo]

April 4-1-1
Defense beat the underdogs
For the 3rd banner

Jan 2-6-2-1
Need to keep puppies moving
Make it 3 and 0

 

[mussels]

It looks good to me.
Meets 5-7-5 format.
What am I missing?

Maybe it’s me then
fifth line is eight not seven
do I have this right

 

[CL82]

Maybe it’s me then
fifth line is eight not seven
do I have this right

Ah, now I have it.
Was looking at the 4th line.
The 5th needs the fix.

 

[Doginaus]

Plop myself right down,
in front of the TV set,
Waiting for game time.

Sipping on a brew,
Eating nachos and queso,
Hoping UConn wins.

Need to step it up,
and play lights out basketball,
to take down Butler.

Well, thats my desire,
hope and dreaming for a win,
to top off my night.

So, can't ask for more,
when Huskies win all is good!
Stress gone with a win.

 

[JakeTheDog]

More Sanogo please
More Adama Sanogo
Sanogo go go

 

[mussels]

Ah, now I have it.
I was looking at the 4th line.
The 5th needs the fix.

More delete needed
first it was "me" now its "I"
look at second line

 

[CL82]

More delete needed
first it was "me" now its "I"
look at second line

It is corrected.
Good work protecting mojo.
Love the vigilance!

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

Find me the remote
going to watch me some tv
winning would be nice

Mussels right on this
Line two has 8; delete "me"
Hope you can Edit

We're better with Bouknight
But are we still good enough?
I think that we are.

So, U C O N N
Connecticut Huskies
UConn, go, fight win.

Still more to correct
And time to re-count & change
If Edit's allowed

First haiku: first line
Second haiku: 1 & 2
Practice makes perfect

Ah, now I have it.
Was looking at the 4th line.
The 5th needs the fix.

Kudos for the change
Timely edits help mojo
Which helps the team win

 

[CL82]

Kudos for the change
Timely edits help mojo
Which helps the team win

It's not my Haiku
So it still may need to be
corrected, I guess.

First haiku: first line
Second haiku: 1 & 2
Practice makes perfect

I did get these though.
I can't believe I missed them.
I'm out of practice.

With longer haikus
there is a bigger chance for
goofs. Start small, I guess.

 

[RichZ]

Some Husky must score
a whole lot of points tonight
Is it Whaley's turn?

I don't care who fills
The stat sheet with big numbers
but someone has to

Need a W
two Ls in a row is bad
But three would be worse

 

[Huskybass]

Martin leads the way
A Double U stops the slide
Chief will not be brief

 

[ZenConn]

Senior Leadership
Why depend on a freshman?
Lead the way seniors

Stop missing bunnies
Free throws need to get better
Dunk dat $h! t all day

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

It's not my Haiku
So it still may need to be
corrected, I guess.

After first posting
You edited out the "I"
Kudos was for that

Otherwise, you're right
But much more importantly,
You 'get' editing

Notifications
Can prompt others to edit
But many here don't

Plus, some posters Like
Haiku that doesn't add up
It's a team effort

If out of practice
Imagine, er, @Yardigan
Start low and go slow.

It's risky bizness
More haiku risks more mistakes
I might have some here