Game Day Haiku...Last Game of Regular Season

[Son of Robert]

Just 'monitoring'
Son of Robert, check line 2
Could just add word "its"



Did Daylight Savings
open opportunity
for Dove to start thread?



You liked the warning
and the correction alerts
But perhaps "Nawlins"?

Be a doo-dah man
And shorten your second line
We need the mojo



Look at ClifSpliffy's
Your video needs haiku
Or a diff'rent thread


"Two syllables short
your second line is" - Yoda
Still time to correct



"OK, this one looks"
Just noting that DST
makes it seem later

This voodoo haiku
casting spells on Tulane U
see ya AAC

Just for the record my man Hans, it is a matter of interpretation by the reader. The intended Tulane U, is just that, I Iike the sound and the rhythm of it. The U is just a U, the word university is implied. Tulane U. It is similar to the AAC lettering in context, these words are not sounded out and counted for syllables.

 

[Son of Robert]

Five then next seven
then five again for Haiku
green wave makes no splash

Hurry up and fix
Before the arrival of
“Hans: Mojo Police.”

Yo, see post above what's true in haiku.

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

Just for the record my man Hans, it is a matter of interpretation by the reader. The intended Tulane U, is just that, I Iike the sound and the rhythm of it. The U is just a U, the word university is implied. Tulane U. It is similar to the AAC lettering in context, these words are not sounded out and counted for syllables.

What you intended
is not what I quoted though
Did you add the "U"?

 

[UKemba15]

What you intended
is not what I quoted though
Did you add the "U"?

Indeed it is true
That at first there was no “U”
In questioned haiku.

 

[Son of Robert]

What you intended
is not what I quoted though
Did you add the "U"?

Indeed it is true
That at first there was no “U”
In questioned haiku.

It was part of the originally posted haiku, but then when I went back later it was not there, and I thought someone with corrective powers had removed it thinking it spelled out university. To the best of my knowledge when I posted it was there because it was part of my 7; I counted, you know how these things go. Perhaps I made a mistake somehow when I posted but again I know we all check.

Anyway, stranger things have happened, thank you for your comments and contributions.

 

[UKemba15]

It was part of the originally posted haiku, but then when I went back later it was not there, and I thought someone with corrective powers had removed it thinking it spelled out university. To the best of my knowledge when I posted it was there because it was part of my 7; I counted, you know how these things go. Perhaps I made a mistake somehow when I posted but again I know we all check.

Anyway, stranger things have happened, thank you for your comments and contributions.

It’s all in good fun, man.

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

It’s all in good fun, man.

All part of teamwork
Haiku coaching improves fans
No scolding... MOJO!

 

[CL82]

It’s all in good fun, man.

Is it? Is it though?
Correct haiku is mojo.
Must obey the rules.

 

[Son of Robert]

It’s all in good fun, man.

Of course, I know this
no stress in my brain at all
more haiku Thursday

 

[Doctor Hoop]

Please consider this:
Start haiku mojo Wednesday
Its an early game