A nice effort but for me kind of uncomfortable.
You couldn't get around the sadness, but I could've done without pouring Pat's bucket over her statue instead of her. In my view, that took it from sadness to something else. It was as though she was already the statue and no longer there herself.
Maybe find another way for her to participate, like pulling a string that dumps the bucket on Holly, or giving the order for the dump. Whatever she can do herself, not as a statue.
Just a subjective reaction; others will no doubt react differently.