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Message: [QUOTE="Hans Sprungfeld, post: 4910255, member: 181"] What you've written comprises 3 separate "easy corrections" that would successfully turn a faux ku into a haiku. With rare exceptions, I only write haiku in the Game Day Haiku Thread. This is in accordance with my considered take on what affects the mojo. I've settled on the practice of writing near haiku that I call "faux ku," wherein one of the three lines is 'off' by a single syllable, either too short or too long. Lately, I've moved toward making the 'mistake' very simple to correct, in order to give a clue that I've done it on purpose. "Take Karaban's lead" was the starting point in my original. In my other two examples, "obviously so" and "Needing but small editing" would work on game day. [/QUOTE]