SDSU Haiku

[DALTX]

Aztecs on field trip
Mayflower and Plymouth Rock
Huskies own the rock

 

[Stinger92860]

Welcome back my friends
to the streak that never ends
so glad UConn can attend

 

[Kolumbo]

8 is very sweet
sweeter than a suckled teet
Huskies are elite

 

[Dove]

No mushing tonight.
UConn will be dancing, yes!!
The Aztec Two-Step.

 

[UCTitleTown]

Senhor T. will soon
Make sure that all the loose balls
Will bounce for UConn

 

[OviedoFLHusky]

Scarfed the hot wings and
Drank the Bai water tonight.
Bai water tastes yecch!

Bai tastes horrible.
You thought Rolling Rock was rank?
Bai is really foul!

Bai is our mojo?
How can Hurley drink this stuff?
I almost puked it.

I never drank pee.
But Bai tastes like how I think
Pee would taste. Dreadful!

But sacrifice is
Part of mojo offerings.
I'm happy to drink.

(sort of)

 

[Hans Sprungfeld]

...

But sacrifice is
Part of mojo offerings.
I'm happy to drink.

(sort of)

You were doing fine
Until that coda. Next time
please write in haiku

 

[OviedoFLHusky]

You were doing fine
Until that coda. Next time
please write in haiku

I thank Sensei Hans
For his critique and I will
Try to remember.