Game Day Haiku UConn vs Tulsa



Hans Sprungfeld

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Pray, who can forget?
UConn't but Hurricane
Last game in Tulsa
Nice try with line two
But you're a syllable short
Easy to repair

Lead slipping away
Conference refs and jacked up threes
I'm on the Nighttrain
I'd spell it "conf'rence"
Removes ambiguity
And stokes the mojo

Bob Dylan archives
JJ Cale and Dwight Twilley
And this from Neil Young...

 
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i said it before
must learn how to win close games
I'm always hopeful

a road game once more
I hope we don't lose again
Beat them now by ten
 
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Hans Sprungfeld

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a road game once more
I hope we don't lose again
Be them now by ten
I think you meant "Beat..."
Otherwise this looks OK
It's a minor touchup

As to all others
Hope syllable count cleanups
Are done by tip-off

I need checking too
No certainty that I'm right
We work as a team
 
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I think you meant "Beat..."
Otherwise this looks OK
It's a minor touchup

As to all others
Hope syllable count cleanups
Are done by tip-off

I need checking too
No certainty that I'm right
We work as a team
I had to go fire
my proof reader on this day
it is all your fault
 

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