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Message: [QUOTE="Hans Sprungfeld, post: 3843771, member: 181"] Line 1 & line 3 Need to be 5 syllables Please change before game What the hell is this? And why in the haiku thread? 5-7-5, man Good monitoring Kudos for count & correct But one small quibble Your first word's tricky Can be read as 1 or 2 I just avoid it As did Get a Job You've chosen a tricky word To end your line two When Castaways sing It sounds like 1 syllable With Billy Joel, 2 Great way to put it Applies on Castaways' song Come to think of it Interesting source Should the mojo be risked by ambiguity? Not mine to decide Game Day Haiku is teamwork We all play our part --------- As to today's game Our New England Big East foe Always plays us tough With many options There are many ways to win To start: play tougher [/QUOTE]